diff --git a/Daniel Chen.typ b/Daniel Chen.typ
index 5058a5b..f810fe0 100644
--- a/Daniel Chen.typ	
+++ b/Daniel Chen.typ	
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-#import "fontawesome.typ": *
+#import "fontawesome.typ": fa, globe, github, linkedin, envelope
 #import "lib.typ": template, education_entry, work_entry, project, indent, SMALL_STRONG, DEFAULT_STRONG
 
 #set page(margin: 1.75in)
@@ -62,9 +62,9 @@
   location: "Remote",
   tasks: (
     [Automated synchronising Airtable and HubSpot APIs with Google Sheets via *AWS Lambda*],
-    [Engineered a *heuristic algorithm* for resolving *SQL* aliases for database-specific editor autocompletion],
+    [Engineered a *heuristic algorithm* to guarantee *SQL* aliases referenced in queries match the database schema],
     [Refactored the frontend to use *react-hook-form* to aggregate and validate user input, improving DX],
-    [Built a service for importing and validating CSV/Excel files from personalised email addresses into databases],
+    [Built a service for *importing and validating CSV/Excel* files from personalised email addresses into databases],
   )
 )
 
@@ -74,10 +74,10 @@
   start_date: "Mar 2023", end_date: "present",
   location: "Waterloo, ON",
   tasks: (
-    [Integrated *OpenTelemetry* and Grafana into a *Kubernetes* cluster to collect traces and improve observability],
-    [Dynamically generated Apple Wallet pass files over *Apollo GraphQL* Server to streamline registration],
+    [Integrated *OpenTelemetry* and Grafana in a *Kubernetes* cluster to collect traces and improve observability],
+    [Dynamically generated user-specific *Apple Wallet* passes over *Apollo GraphQL* Server to streamline check-in],
     [Automated judge-to-hacker matching and scheduling with a custom algorithm based on their preferences],
-    [Organised Canada's largest hackathon with more than 1000 attendees and 6000 applicants],
+    [Horizontally scaled the *Node.js* server to handle *1000+ concurrent users* with *Redis* and *Kubernetes*],
   )
 )
 ]
@@ -87,26 +87,26 @@
 
 #indent[
 #project("Mandown Comic Converter", "https://github.com/potatoeggy/mandown", "Python, Qt")
-- Developed a CLI to scrape, download, and convert online comics into e-ink friendly formats
-- Abstracted 4 ebook creation libraries into a common comic conversion API for e-ink devices
+- Created a CLI and GUI to scrape, download, and convert webcomics into e-ink friendly ebooks
+- Designed a standard *intermediate representation* to convert between different comic formats (EPUB, PDF)
 - Implemented *image caching and multiprocessing* to increase download and update speeds by *300%*
 - Minimised regressions between release cycles by writing *unit and integration tests* with 55% code coverage
 
 #project("Primoprod Genshin Simulator", "https://github.com/potatoeggy/primoprod", "Vue, TypeScript")
-- Created an interactive, realistic, cross-platform game simulator with fluid animations based off a popular game
-- Constructed an extensible JSON data schema to concisely simplify adding new game content
+- Built an interactive, realistic, and beautiful game simulator with fluid animations based off a popular game
+- Constructed an *extensible JSON data schema* to let the user dynamically switch between game versions
 
 // #project("Kobink — Kobo Sync Server", "https://github.com/potatoeggy/kobink", "Rust, Axum, Postgres")
 // - ??? something here (reverse engineering)
 // - ??? something here (synchronisation and DB, HTTP headers)
 
 #project("RecipeReady Recipe Aggregator", "https://github.com/vincentjguo/recipeready-server", "Flutter, Selenium, FastAPI, Android")
-- Developed a cross-platform mobile/web app to generate recipes based on ingredients and dietary restrictions
+- Developed a *Flutter app* to generate recipes based on ingredients and filters through a FastAPI server
 - Scraped thousands of websites for recipes to build a database with a robust *many-to-many tag system*
 - Aggregated common ingredients heuristically to build a shopping list and a meal plan for each week
 
 #project("Box Box Revolution", "https://github.com/potatoeggy/boxboxrevolution", "Rust, STM32")
-- Developed a rhythm game to detect punches with an ultrasonic sensor in line wth notes of popular songs
+- Created a rhythm game to detect punches with an ultrasonic sensor in line wth notes of popular songs
 - Developed firmware to measure from an ultrasonic sensor, tone a buzzer, and show scrolling notes on an LCD
 ]